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"PLEEEASE (NAAAAME)?" Alfred begged, he has been trying to get you to watch a horror movie with him at his house. You did like scary movies though the problem was the person you were watching it with. He's a huge wimp when it comes to anything remotely scary so the poor soul watching that kind of movie with him, would have to comfort the scaredy-cat... Not at all fun.

"No, you know how you get!" You refused, trying so hard not to look at his puppy face. That worked... until he grabs your face and turns it to face his. 'OH GOD NO, NOT THE TEARY EYES,' you thought desperately, though you blushed slightly at the closeness of your faces. He totally isn't your crush or anything like that (so much sarcasm). 

Your blue-eyed crush now had that kicked-puppy-that-still-loves-you look that made you want to glomp him, "Please??? I don't wanna watch it alone!"

"F-fine...YOU BETTER HAVE (favorite candy or snack) THOUGH!" Your last defenses fell as you gave in. 

"YAY! THANKS (name), YOU'RE THE BESTEST BUDDY A GUY COULD HAVE! DON'T WORRY, THE HERO WILL COMFORT YOU!" Alfred exclaimed as he picked you up in a bone-crushing hug and swung you around like a teddy bear. All the people in the park looked at the (h/c) haired girl and the blonde man like they were nuts. 

You squirmed in the tight hug, trying to get sweet air that had been squeezed out of your body, "Al-fred c-can't breat-th." 

"WHAT? OH SORRY DUDE, HAHAHAHA!" He finally set you down carefully, sometimes Alfred forgot his own strength. Watching you gasping, he couldn't help notice your beautiful (e/c) eyes that sparkled all the time or the way your silky hair shines or your sweet and caring personality. Al couldn't believe how lucky he was to have a best friend like you. Guess what? He had a crush on you too! Even heroes get shy, the loud American hadn't told you in case you wouldn't like him back. MAN UP OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY PEACE PRIZE

"Um, Alfy, you okay?" You asked, concerned. He was staring at you for a while without speaking (which is abnormal on its own as he will never shut up, not like you minded), plus his cheeks seemed to be tainted a bit red. It darkened when he snapped back to reality.

"O-oh ye-eah. I MEAN, OF COURSE. THE HERO'S ALWAYS OKAY NOW LET'S GO!" he fixed his glasses before grabbed your hand and dragged you to his house, stopping for McDonalds on the way.

"One (favorite drink) and (favorite candy or snack) for the awesome (name)!" Alfred exclaimed as he handed you the items before plopping down next to you on the blue couch.

"Awesomer than Gilbert? Also, thanks!"

"Sure! ....Don't tell him I said that."

"No promises!"

"B-but I thought we were friends?!"

This went on for a bit until the movie started, he picked the Collector and boy, was it chilling! During the whole movie, Alfred clutched onto you more than Matthew to Kumajirou! A sudden movement or noise made him shriek and hide behind your back, as you jumped a bit but still munching on your food.

After the movie:
"Wow, wasn't that a interesting movie? Alfred? Alfy? Alf?" You poked Alfred in the cheek, but he still hadn't let you go nor moved.
........

........ 
"WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! THAT WAS SO SCARY! (NAME) ARE YOU OKAY? THE HERO WON'T LET HIM HURT YOU!" He then picked you up bridle-style before bolting to his bedroom, tossing you on the American flag bed like a rag doll, locking the door, then finally jumping on the bed too and hugged you tightly.

You gave a small chuckle, though you couldn't help that your face looked like a tomato at the moment. "Alfy, don't worry; it's just a movie." You petted his hair, avoiding his cowlick since he told you never touch or pull it. You couldn't help but stare at it until you felt your shirt getting wet.

"(name) PROMISE ME THAT YOU WON'T LEAVE ME, I DON'T WANT YOU TO DIEEEE!" Alfred sobbed into your stomach, tightening his hold on you, "I DON'T WANT YOU TO GO BEFORE I TELL YOU I-" he then shut up, realizing he said too much.

You tilted your head at him when he lifted his, "Tell me what? Alfred F. Jones, you tell me right now!" You only used his full name when you were angry or wanted to know something NOW. 

His light skin now growing a bright scarlet as he pulled away and hid his face into a star-shaped pillow. 'GODDAMMIT, why can't I shut up?! What if she doesn't feel the same way, and I ruin our friendship? I don't want to lose her.... I don't know what I'd do if I did....' (d'awww you made him fluffy!) 

You swept the (h/c) hair out of your face as you stared at your crush in a 'you better tell me right now or God help you' way. Then, you saw a blur of yellow before you realized he was kissing you. 

He pulled away before you could respond, "I love you. I love your (e/c) eyes and how they are full of light, your (h/c) hair that always manages to bounce and shine, you're kind, funny, beautiful, crazy, caring, and fun personality make me the luckiest guy in the world just to know you! I can understand if you don't feel the sam- MMPH!"

You pressed your lips to his soft ones, shutting him up. He eagerly kissed back, sparks filled your bodies like fireworks exploded in your heart. After pulling away for air, you gave him a loving smile, "Of course, I feel the same way, idiot!"  Your now boyfriend gave his goofy grin before locking your lips in other loving kiss.

Extended Ending:

"...Can I pull your cowlick now?" ".....Maybe later in the relationship." "B-but-" "No." 
HEY LOOK MY FIRST X READER. And thingy on this accountant. Please give me feedback (or I'll get America to use his puppy face), I need to learn how to write hetalia characters since I'm rather new to this fandom.

~Hope you America fangirls enjoyed this! Maybe tell me who I should write next? I'm out of ideas! :iconbegplz:
Grazie~

DO NOT OWN HETALIA OR ALFRED/AMERICA (sadly)

EDIT: okay, I'm getting a little annoyed. This is a one shot: No sequels. And please stop saying that you pulled the cowlick or you are trying to bribe Alfred into letting you pull it. I would have not included that bit in if I knew I would get so many comments of the same thing. Too many people have said that and it's just getting irritating. I really appreciate that you guys liked the story, but please.
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:iconlyssander444:
Lyssander444 Featured By Owner 1 day ago
You shall let me pull Nantucket!
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AteneanAggie Featured By Owner May 7, 2015
MUST. PULL.THE.COWLICK!!!
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FangirlingToTheMax Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
Da Nantucket cowlick.... I'm tempted to pull dat!
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:iconcheetahboots:
CheetahBoots Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
READER, FOR YOUR OWN SAKE DO NOT! TOUCH THAT COWLICK!








(if u do chu will get -LOSE YOUR VIRGINITY-)
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animegeek1235 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015
The cowlick omg the cowlick
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:iconhetaliafangirl01:
hetaliafangirl01 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
I make all the men fluffy....
and u nevr ask 2 pull it u just yank it~
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:iconwolfduchess:
WolfDuchess Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
*sneakily moves hand around head towards cowlick* HEHEHEHE- O poop
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:iconpoisonazalea:
PoisonAzalea Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Student Writer
the cowlick! XD
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:icon8luvanime8:
8luvanime8 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Nope im going to pull it anyway!!!xD
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:iconsagexeyelessjack:
SageXEyelessJack Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
SNEAK ATTACK!
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:icon8luvanime8:
8luvanime8 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
AAAHHHH!!!!IM SORRY!!!!NO SNEAK ATTACKS!!!!!
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SageXEyelessJack Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
*squints eyes and points fingers from my eyes to hers and hides in a bush*
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8luvanime8 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
........*slowly walks away*
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Addiestar-of-froclan Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MAN UP OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY PEACE PRIZE

so funny omg i laughed so hard!!!England (Laughing) [V3] Romano (Mustache Laughs) [V1] Mew Laughing Hetalia Prussia (Laugh) France Laughing - Evil Inverted China (Explaining) [V2] 
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Queen-of-Weirdos Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   General Artist
"B-but-"
 
I would have done it any way :D
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:iconmidnaplayer:
MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*quickly snakes hand around the back of his head* "yoink >:D" whatcha gon say to me nao that I pulled your nan-to-da-tuckett???
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:iconirysopal:
IrysOpal Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*pulls Nantucket anyways and runs giggling like a maniac* xD
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
America: *glomps you* now where do you think you're going?" Whispers erotically behind your ear.
You: (insert response here)

u gonna have have a long night, bebe gurl.
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:iconirysopal:
IrysOpal Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL! xD o/////o
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:iconmidnaplayer:
MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Kehehehe...Stare 
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killerkatie23x23 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
LET TOUCH YO DAMN CLOWLICK!!!!
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IGame101 Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"...Can I pull your cowlick now?"
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NotSoInnocent12 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Reader chan!!!America (Justice) [V1]  Don't pull the cowlick or you will be raped~France (Denies) [V1]
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HetaliaEnglandLove Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
B-BUT THE LUSH COWLICK!!! DAMMIT TO MOTHER DAN HOWELL. ._.
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animegeek1235 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015
Dans not on fire reference
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Prussia-is-awesome-1 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I love this so much!! You are really good a writing reader inserts! Could you help me? Maybe a few pointers? I'm new to writing...
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:iconcanadianturtle:
CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
I haven't written a reader insert in a while but I'd be happy to help! Either shoot me a note or you can reply to this with a question c:
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Prussia-is-awesome-1 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
I was thinking about writing a fluffy yuri no lemon A belarus x reader how should i go about doing that?
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:iconcanadianturtle:
CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Writer
Well that's a pretty general question that I'm not sure I really have an answer for!
There are 2 main tactics to begin writing in my opinion
1: Plan it out. Think about the main plot, research about whatever you need such as the character, etc. Recommended for longer stories
2. Just start writing. I personally do this a lot and sometimes it works, sometimes no. You just start writing and come up with a plot along the way. Best for drabbles or short fics. 
Of course you can combine the two and do whatever you'd like, but I can't really help you much on this as you need to think of a plot or just find inspiration. 
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Flames-of-awesome Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me: Hey Al can I pull ur cowlick now?
Al: No!
Me: Let me touch it or I shall throw you onto Vash's (Switzerland) lawn! And afterwards beat u with his Peace Prize!!
Al: B-but-
Me: Yoink! *pulls cowlick* :icontrollfaceplz:


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KathyBrine Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Writer
*gives a please-I-want-to-touch-it-now-or-no-BigMacs look*

Alfred: Nope.

Me: No more hamburgers.

Alfred: YES MA'AM! *lowers head*
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DarylDixonsVixen Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
MAN UP OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY PEACE PRIZE!!!

Easily the funniest thing in the world. THANK YOU, SWITZERLAND!!
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Student Writer
Favorite quote from him ever c:
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aisha101forever Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Me:'can I pretty please with a cherry on top pull your cowlick Alfred? * whimpering*
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:iconartemiswest:
ArtemisWest Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
What happens when you pull 'Nantucket'?? Big sis won't tell MEEEE!!!!
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Let's just say you won't be a virgin anymore dear and lets leave it at that.
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:iconartemiswest:
ArtemisWest Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
Alcie here.

Yeah.... No. I'm eleven years old, so no thanks, Alfie
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Femdenmark92 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
•touches the cowlick anyways•
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guardianarchangel Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
awwww this is so cute
poor alfie (Hugs alfie)
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:iconcanadianturtle:
CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! c:
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guardianarchangel Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
your welcome

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AngelSong107 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just wrote my first Reader insert a few days ago. And you did better than me! xD I'm still trying to figure out how to get a picture at the top of the story and how to use Italics xD I liked it! I like the ending too. What if you made a sequel where it's a Lemon xD 
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:iconcanadianturtle:
CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Student Writer
Ah you'll get better, just keep practicing! 
I've been writing on da before moving to reader inserts so I know how it works, so don't compare me to you c:
Thank you so much! Haha that's not going to happen cx
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AngelSong107 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhhh okay. I'm almost done with my second one. Hopefully I can figure it out. :D
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xXJetBlackOwlXx Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Writer
WOAH!!! This was your first reader insert!? It's great!! You have absolutly great stories! Have a Russiacat!
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:iconcanadianturtle:
CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Writer
It was! Thank you so much! c:
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xXJetBlackOwlXx Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Writer
Nya~! Your first reader insert is better than some of my newer ones!
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:iconcanadianturtle:
CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Writer
Aw no, I bet yours are fantastic!
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xXJetBlackOwlXx Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student Writer
I need to work on them more, but I am working on a manga with my friend!
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:iconcanadianturtle:
CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student Writer
That sounds awesome, good luck to you both c:
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