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[Please don't hate the others in the comments! You will know who I mean.]
(Name) groaned, closing and putting aside her laptop then rolling off of the couch and onto the wooden floor below her. "Only Allied powers can attend the meeting, well excluding flying mint bunny which doesn't exist," She mocked a northern English accent, placing her hands on her eyebrows. The (h/c) haired girl sighed as she glared at the plain white ceiling, waiting for her American boyfriend to get back from a meeting. (Name)'s boss didn't want the country to be part of the "Allied powers" just allies to all of them... Yeah, it was complicated. Now (Country) had the main export of BOREDOM. She stood up sluggishly, brushing off her stolen borrowed shirt from Alfred which happened to have a Batman symbol on the chest. Smiling at the dark t-shirt, she walked to the kitchen to get (favorite drink).
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"That idea is almost as stupid as you are, America," England said, rolling his idea and drinking his tea. The other countries just finished hearing another "GET A HERO TO FIX STUFF!" idea from said American. "For once, I agree with zhe black sheep! Zhat plan does include 'ow gorgeous I am!~" France sang, twirling around as the Brit began to shout threats at him again.

"Well none of my ideas will be as stupid as your eyebrows, dude!" He shot back, sinking back down to his chair, his cowlick drooping. England looked up from choking the Frenchman and scoffed, "Wanker. What a weak comeback! My eyebrows probably have a higher IQ than you, and you're fat." Actually a little hurt, America turned his bright blue eyes to China and Russia quietly asking for help, but received the opposite. "Being honest, he's right, aru," China muttered, leaning away from Russia as usual. Smiling, Russia nodded, "Da, I agree!"

"I don't know 'ow (Country) stays with you, America! I mean, she could 'ave moi- 'ey, where are you going?" France flipped his long blond hair before America stood up and walked towards the door. "America, where in bloody hell are-" "Leaving." The usually happy nation interrupted coldly, hoping his voice doesn't crack as a tear fell. He slammed the door as he did was he said and left the four in shock.

Meanwhile, (Name) was finishing up her (favorite drink) when she heard a punkish song that she had set as a ringtone for England. With a pout, she set the drink on the table and retrieved the cellphone, answering it. "Hey, what's up, Arthur?" (Country) asked curiously, knowing the meeting hasn't finished yet.

"Sorry to bother, love, but America just...well, stormed out," A Northern English accent replied, "He doesn't often do that, does he?" Pinching the bridge of her nose, the female sighed and said slowly, "What did you guys say?"
"Well, n-nothing too bad! Just that he was stupid and fat..." The Brit spoke quickly, "Oh... But we have said this before-!" "I know, but go easy on your insults, Iggy. Got to go, bye." Click. Slipping on shoes, she left the large house in search of America, knowing exactly where to look. Contrary to popular belief, if America is deeply hurt he doesn't go to Mc Donald's and eat; he would go somewhere quiet and secluded to cry.
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Alfred sat down in the middle of a grass field of a park, tears streaming freely as his head was in his hands. He didn't care about what the others say, they usually don't mean it...Well, except Russia as the two still weren't exactly on good terms. But lately, the blond has been wondering why his girlfriend was with him and just feeling terribly insecure. So those comments were just fuel to the fire and felt like salt on a wound. "I bet she is just staying with me out of pity..." he choked out, staring at his hands.

"THAT'S NOT TRUE!" A voice caused his head to snap up and his eyes to meet (e/c). There (country) was, stomping up to him, an angry expression on her usually smiling face. Before Alfred could make a noise, she flung her arms around him, her jean-clad knees meeting the welcoming grass. "You are really thick for thinking that's why I'm with you," (Name) whispered as she released him and sat right next to him and he had to turn his head to see her. "What are you-" "Just shut up and listen..."

She began to sing gently, "Your hand fits in mine like it's made just for me.
But bear this in mind, it was meant to be
And I'm joining up the dots, with the freckles on your cheeks
And it all makes sense to me." Her fingers ghosted over his cheeks, lightly touching the scarce freckles on his smooth skin that still had dried tears on it. Alfred watched his girlfriend in curiosity as the sun began to set, casting an orange light on the couple.

"I know you've never loved the crinkles by your eyes when you smile. You've never loved your stomach or your thighs
The dimples in your back at the bottom of your spine
But I'll love them endlessly." (Name) pressed a kiss by one of his bright blue eyes, her soft hands resting on his thigh and near the end of his back as she continued.

"You can't go to bed without a cup of tea (or soda in your case, Alfy!)
And maybe that's the reason you talk in your sleep
And all those conversations are the secrets that I keep
Though it makes no sense to me," She laughed this time, remembering all those words he muttered while he slept; though he flushed a light pink in embarrassment.
"I know you've never love the sound of your voice on tape
You never want to know how much you weigh!
You still have to squeeze into your jeans,
But you're perfect to me." Alfred was grinning now, (Name)'s beautiful voice coupled with her gentle smile couldn't allow him to stay depressed. Resting her head on his broad shoulders, she sang the next part softly as she began to feel tired.

"You'll never love yourself half as much as I love you.
You'll never treat yourself right darlin'
But I want you to!
If I let you know i'm here for you
Maybe you'll love yourself like I love you," America looked her in the eyes and found tears in the orbs of (e/c).

I've just let these little things out of my mouth
Cause it's you, oh it's you, it's you
They add up to, and I'm in love with you
And all your little things..." She trailed off, playing with his golden locks before yawning, "Don't you ever think I stay out of pity again. I stay because I love you and all your little things." (Name)'s eyelids began to droop as she nuzzled her face to his pale neck, soon sleep was too powerful. Alfred petted her (h/c) hair as he began to cry again, but out of pure happiness. Smiling brightly, the male picks her up easily while whispering, "Thanks, (Name), I love you so much." He grinned so hard his face hurt when he heard her mutter, "Of course you do, I'm awesome. Now stop crying, you're too good looking for that, and lets go home..."
I TRIED, OKAY *sobs* My baby ;w;
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As usual I own nothing except the story~:heart:
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Astral-Aang Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i personally think bae is fine theway he is! i think heis has a suitable body type.
not ripped and has muscles on their musnles or fat. hes just perfect! the next person
who says America/Alfred is fat is going to get slapped and wil have to eat England's  food!
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Cartoonsdreamgal Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How this would probobaly go with me in real life *If Hetalia was real*

*Me walking up to England*
Me: HOW DARE YOU SAY SUCH HURTFULL THINGS! MAY THE GODS HAVE MERCY ON YOU!fair fight Falcon punch :ohnoesrambo: 

* I walk up to Alfred and hug him*
Me:Kitty Jessica Masuzu Natsukawa (Teehee) [V1] Tackling hug Natsuki Shinomiya (Super hug) [V1] Chili Anime Emoji (Snuggy hug) [V2] 
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notsogirlygirl22 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
mg 1D I love them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
no.....America is not fat........HE ISH FLUFFY! (my term for chubby.....nya)

and this is cute!
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CrystalHoneys Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
I swear I felt a tear go down my face while singing Little Things at Niall's Verse
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notsogirlygirl22 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
sorry but I forgot which verse that is but I am a ultra fan I went to a concert for my b-day 5sos opened and my birthday is on he same day as nialls but I am horrible at verses
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CrystalHoneys Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
"You'll never love yourself half as much as I love you.
You'll never treat yourself right darlin'
But I want you to!
If I let you know i'm here for you
Maybe you'll love yourself like I love you,"   

That's Niall's verse. And it's okay! Manaka Smile [V1]  I tend to forget some of the boys' verses. I either forget them or mix their verses up.Onion Boy 6 
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notsogirlygirl22 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
Thanks my Instagram is 1dand5sosfangal if you want to check it out
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CrystalHoneys Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
Sure, I'll check it out!Racing Girl Emoji (Heart shot wink) [V3] 
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notsogirlygirl22 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015
thx i just posted my clothes from shopping
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Makeshift-prime Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Artist
I looked up the song....... Even though the only version I could find was by 1D it's a pretty good song and it fits with a even better story :) 
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A-NonnyMouseFangirl Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The song is by one direction, so I don't know if there is another 'official' version
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elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Me:(Nightcore Version)Kudryavka Noumi Kud (Masato Dance) [V10] Kiku Honda -Japan- Answers [Hetalia Axis Power]
America:America (Yo) [V6] America (Salutes) [V6] America (Intro) [V7] 
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elyanaxlevilove Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
me:Kyoko Singing Icon AKIo-sing (Acchi kocchi) Momo Kisaragi (Sings) [V1] Kawaii Shoujo (Sings) [V1] Megurine Luka (Sings) 
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spazzy-kitty Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
"THAT'S NOT TRUE!" A voice caused his head to snap up and his eyes to meet (e/c).
YOU SAID WITH MEGA SASS AND CAME RUNNING WITH A SPEAR THAT HAD A FEW DECAPITATED HANDS (of the Allies) ON THE BLADE.
"OH MY GOD IS THAT ENGLAND'S HAND?!" Alfred screeched, causing you to chuckle.
"How did you recognise it? And yes. They hurt you so I hurt them." You said darkly, yet sweetly, as you hugged the blonde.
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A-NonnyMouseFangirl Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...Okay~ ^_^
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KissingMoonlitTears Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awwwww!!!!! ;*3   *slaps England upside the head* why'd you go and make America cry you dick?! >:(
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kurino-sama-alpha Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
*whacks his skull with mini frying pan* don't make the Hero cry, ass-face!! *whacks the other 3 as well*
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AngllannaKurayami Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
Delilah: *kicks all 4 where the sun don't shine*  They won't be getting up for a while.
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TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
of course you do, i'm awesome

*somewhere*

Prussia: SOMEONE IS USING MY WORD WiTHOUT MY NAME IN IT!!!
Germany: Prussia...*sigh pinches the bridge on his nose*
You're just being paranoid.
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Writer
haha prussia has an "awesome" sensor!
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TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yup owo
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zara-anime Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Fat Chocobo He is not fat he is chubby<img> and chubby is cute you guys are just jealous mwaahahahahahh  
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StoryOfAGirlGoneBi Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i really like this!!!!
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Writer
thank you! c:
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Keira-donoXD Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Yay for France being an asshole! 

 Fahk. 

 
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ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student General Artist
*hands you box of my feels* take care of them. They need to have at least three peanut butter covered pickles everyday, and make sure they have plenty of tea.


Wonderful job. I honestly despise one direction (even though i stool have posters, dolls, and blankets and pillows of them from when i liked them) i freaking love that song.
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Writer
*takes box* I promise to take good care of them.

Thank you! I'm not a fan, but that song is very sweet c:
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ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome ^^
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americangirl122 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Student Artist
Loved it <3
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IzzyLovesAnime Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was thinking. Since this is the reader comforting Alfie. Hypothetically, if Alfred was a real person I wonder if he would be like a reader is when they read fluff? Anywho, ignore me. Sorry.
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MehhhGoAway Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
Even though I don't like the song (or One Direction) this was a good story. Good job!
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! I really liked that song, it was cute and sounded nice even though I'm not a fan of 1D. Thanks again:heart:
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MissAbbiKenway Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student General Artist
oH LOrD JeSUS ONE DIRECTION ~! ONE DIRECTION INSPIRED SONG AAAHAHH

but anyways i loved this very much *claps*
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otakuchica2000 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconallthesefeelsplz:
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconrightinthefeelsplz:
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Sunstone123 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
I love this song so much thank you for making it!!!!
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hellosaidcarly Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
This is so heartwarming. This story tells what REAL love is. I love how my character doesn't give a damn of what size Alfred is, she still loves him. Arthur is only jealous of Alfred in my opinion ;) Anyway, I loved this and the joyous moment of acceptance. Thanks for sharing! :-)
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you for reading and for the kind comment!~:heart:
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AlphaShepardWolf Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student General Artist
AWWWW I LUV DIS!
I was listening to the song when I was reading this. I was singing all the lyrics! Then my mother came to my room and found me (after reading the story) on my bed hugging a picture of Alfred/America crying singing the song with my headphones. Heh I'm on my way to the therapist now.
P.s. if Alfred was 200 lbs pounds over weight I'd still luv him.
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Ryuie Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcannotevenplz:
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Student Writer
:icontherethereplz:
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
Aw,poor Alfred.
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Writer
:iconamericawhyplz:
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
*kindly offers him a hug*
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Writer
:iconsadamericaplz:: *gratefully takes hug*
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
Do you want me to sing to you? I know a few lullabies.
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Writer
:iconalfredjonesplz:: No, I'm okay, dude! Just needed a hug... Thanks.
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
Hey,I can sing really good...
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CanadianTurtle Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Writer
:iconamericaisamusedplz:: I know, but I kind of got to run. Really though, thanks, dude!
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